I told ya you were a great writer sweetheart, perhaps one day you'll believe me. this short poem is strong, envious one is, at least you can write effective short poetry. well written babes. Love you xxx

This is but an example of a type of poem that I like reading.

Well done, I liked that it's place under miscellaneous because this piece can go either talking about the dock or talking about a person.

It's quiet interesting...

This is awesome, this is one of those poem that takes you somewhere different, it doesn't end with the words you finished your lines with. It has depth.. I love this poem, it gave me a cold feeling, sad one...made me think of winter and some misfortunes.. aint sure if you know what I mean, but this is awesome...really talented! Nominated