Wow ! An other poem from you, your style is one of those I'm fond of! I just LOVE poems that takes you in with a personal touch, those poems that makes you think, makes you relate.

you have a talent with words, and definitely do have a special touch with the way you cut off your lines.

My only suggestion would be to add some full stops and punctuation, it would add a lot of good effects while the reader goes through the poem, and knows where is it best to stop.

nominated as well, awesome writes.