Untrusting

by Baby Rainbow   Aug 8, 2012


Everything you done to me
and all the things you said,
echo loudly and crystal clear
inside the corridors in my head.

You tortured me for months
and made me want to die.
There then became the point
where I couldn't even cry.

You blamed your actions on me,
you began to scream and shout.
I begged for you to let me go
but you refused to let me out.

Did you think that I'd forgive you?
Did you think I would forget,
all the pain you caused me,
all the confusion and upset?

You hurt me more than words
could ever begin to say,
of all the things you done
you took my trust away.

And now because of you
I will never trust again.
Never let anyone get so close
but forever feel this pain.

Saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I can see a few lines seemed forced but apart from that an amazing worded poem

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    An old poem, if I compare it with the new ones.. I can see that there were a few force rhymes in this piece unlike your new ones.. however, the emotion in the piece is still intact.

    When someone hurt us and takes away our trust is hard to regain it. But I do know that everyone is different and that trust is something that is earn with time, so perhaps the trust in that person cannot be given back, but may be, you might be able to find later on someone who deserves your trust.

    Good write.

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