Comments : Untrusting

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    An old poem, if I compare it with the new ones.. I can see that there were a few force rhymes in this piece unlike your new ones.. however, the emotion in the piece is still intact.

    When someone hurt us and takes away our trust is hard to regain it. But I do know that everyone is different and that trust is something that is earn with time, so perhaps the trust in that person cannot be given back, but may be, you might be able to find later on someone who deserves your trust.

    Good write.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I can see a few lines seemed forced but apart from that an amazing worded poem