You have been through a lot, yet you are here standing strong, that's admirable. Though, it is sad that this person betrayed you, and even more saddening knowing that this person is someone really important to you because after being through a lot, the betrayal from this someone is much hurtful than the rest. But keep being as strong or much more stronger than what you have been, I don't know how things happened, but I think it's best to have found out about the betrayal than to not know.

Structure wise: I like how you can rhyme with so much ease, and how your pieces always flow with emotion despite being constraint by the rhymes.

Also there is a little typo on this line:

"I was pucnhed and kicked around," Correction: Punched..instead of Pucnhed.

Aside from that little typo, you are a great writer. Stay strong.

Wow, this is heartbreaking to read.
The agony you had to endure and the betrayal by soneone close to you.
It can be very very painful and overwhelming but it also teaches us a lesson
and it will us so much stronger.
You are extremely strong, never doubt
that for one minute. Give yourself credit
for that. Never let anybody or anything
defeat you.

Wow I admire your strenght, you're really strong, tasted all this, and you're still standing.You really are inspiring.

This piece touched me soo deep, love it, perfectly written:)

I admire the woman you are today, you are a true example of the saying that what doesnt kill you makes you stronger! You have gone through a lot, you have lost a lot but you chose to stay strong rather than surrender to weakness.

God bless you <3

I totally agree with meme you are a role model to everyone and I hope you find the life you deserve

Really deep emotions a tragic story but an amazing write