Comments : TANYA

  • 12 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    This is a very simple poem but beautifully written. It flows well, and I like how the last line ties the previous lines together. without the last line the poem would be mediocre. well done.

    • 12 years ago

      by WanderingShade

      Thank you it would have been more visually pleasing if the site hadn't auto-corrected my indentations.