I want you to be...

by Bubble   Aug 9, 2012


I want you to be my power, to help me gain courage
I want you to be my sage,
to enlighten my knowledge
I want you to my support,
when my efforts goes in vain
I want you to be that healing touch,
to give relief from my pain
I want you to be my motivation
to give my best for our dream
I want you to be that soul,
which can hear my speechless scream
I want you to be those hands,
to lend me when I fall down
I want you to be that smile,
to spread happiness all around
I want you to be my best friend,
with whom I need not pretend
I want you to be the messenger,
to convey love that the God has send.

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    U knw sum terms r realy gud..like 'speechless scream'.
    Then ,d second half of d poem has much strong emotions..coz as d reader reads more, needs more..
    Overal, a gud piece.
    U hv gud poetic skils..d only thing is u need to structure uor poem well..

    • 12 years ago

      by Bubble

      Thank you everyone for ur encouragement...:-))

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Answers found, come from what we seek. Love is a seed, it grows with time.

  • 12 years ago

    by Renssey Heart Vine

    You know bubble
    u have the potential to be a good writer..
    you poem was nice, for it makes every reader to dream.. i love the way it written. wish you good luck!!
    keep making on poems..

  • 12 years ago

    by Renssey Heart Vine

    You know bubble
    u have the potential to be a good writer..
    your poem was nice, for it makes every reader to dream.. i love the way it written. wish you good luck!!
    keep making on poems..

    • 12 years ago

      by Bubble

      Thk u Eloren..so sweet of you.hope i can discover my writing skills!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Yours is already nice...i need not help u improve dear!!

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