Bouquet (Haiku)

So here I am reading another pretty nature piece from you, and you throw out words like colossal rhapsody, haha! I love that!

I really enjoyed this piece, your images are so beautiful, you're an artist with a pen (or keyboard, here lol). This was gorgeous!

I think you may be looking at a painting here for your inspiration but...I'm really not sure because...I'm honestly not too keen on your opening line...it doesn't really tell me much

A colossal rhapsody on the other hand just tells me too much...one of these words would suffice in my opinion but..to place them both together in such close proximity didn't really work IMHO

of sweet wild flowers...think you could work on this more because it's the best line in this haiku...

Just my honest thoughts once more...

Colossal rhapsody...wow....how do you do it!

3 lines
17 syllables
2 words make this entire poem!!

Beautiful!

And if I could send you one of these I would! x

Awesom piece Andrea.
I think that the word 'flowers' is not 3 syllables but only two.
I enjoyed the reading