Comments : The Big Raft (Tanka)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Larry.
    What a great message inside this stunning tanka! Awesome as always :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great tanka as 5/7/5/7/7 syllables. I think, if I'm not mistaken, there should be some commas to complete the meaning as follows:
    Maturity test:
    you cease to identify
    only your own group,
    as containing the essence,
    the spark of humanity.

    I really enjoyed reading the contents.