My Siamese Cat (An Expanded Haiku)

It's not as funny as the other one but it does have it's cute parts lol

Queen Ash

I think you need to explain what you mean by expanding the haiku, that might clear up any syllable confusion,

As for the content, I feel you have captured the character of a cat really well, they will go after anything wont they?
I like how you used bat and rat, basically covers the floor and sky.

Short, fun, and excellent

I have a Siamese and no matter how much you feed her, she's ALWAYS hungry.
Lucky she's very quick and very smart. (:

This is such a cute poem! Simple, but effective.

Lol this is pretty cool,

I like the syllable count as well as the rhymes at the end. Pretty genius in my opinion.

My only suggestion is to delete the (haiku part on the tittle. A haiku, if I'm not mistaken, is a poem with less than 20 syllables.. There can be different variations.. Etc. Any who, I like this piece.