Alone

by Emily   Aug 10, 2012


A conversation with myself.
Hollow phrases that scare me.
I look up and witness my ghost dancing alone on the wall.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lyndy

    Its really nice..makes me crave for more

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Its really hard to make something like this and get all the messages thru, I mean, with such short poem. But anyways, I think you said what you wanna say here and its good how you did it. It would be nicer if youd come up with some part2 with this. But thats just my idea. Its nice the way it is.

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    This is really good, but it seems incomplete.

    The content is intriguing and worded quite well. Add another stanza or two and I think it will definitely improve the piece.

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