Awesome write. I love the second stanza the most.

Wow. With out a doubt you are an amazing poetress. The imagery is phenomnal. Keep writing for this is true talent.

Title:
A Blood Stained Memory?
Mother Earth Will Remember My Name?
Remember Me As I Once Was?
Remember Me As A Rose?

Idk, Just throwing some out there. Im okay at writing them, Im not the best at naming them.

Thank you for the comment and the ideas!!

They are really good. I could not think of a damn thing for this piece my self, so you're help is much appreciated and will be commended (if I do use one of your titles, which I think I might... which one though, they all great, lol)

Take care.

I love this. Well done

Wow. Beautiful. When I read this I saw almost movie clips in my head..if that makes sense..lol these images are beautiful, sad, and tragic. So amazing!