by karyssa smith
I love this poem. I can strongly relate to this. good job :) |
by Britt
This is seriously a gorgeous poem. On Monday I'm going to try and remember to nominate this. |
by Dawn
Thank you so much, it really does mean a lot, and you know exactly what I was trying to get at. I'm very surprised you liked it that much, and I thank you again. |
I agree about the play on senses here, from lavender to the very last line "rob me of my shallow breathing" there was such a strong expression you used here to get to the reader. |
Beautiful. I give it a 5/5 for sure. Good work! =) |