The greediness of some people makes them blind, they dont see anything, they just want more. Well written good job:)

It's the greed that's kills the human race
They want more and more

Its realy true no feel satisfied even we got everything

Perfect and so very true!
I like how this kind of made an image of a person sitting down - a view from the back.
People have become so greedy and materialistic - it really is quite sad that they cannot appreciate what they already have.

This piece is structured beautifully.
The flow and pace were excellent.

A stunning piece with a great message! (: