by Colm
In this poem too you seem to have a nice understanding of flow and this is one of the better rhyming poems I have seen recently. It has the feel of a old writer looking back on their life, digesting their experiences and putting them to paper. |
by Lyndy
Thank you for your critique..your right about the last line in the fourth stanza..i kind of got lost on that part when I wrote this..I really hope to do better next time..your comments inspired me, thank you:) |