Loved this :D adding this to my favorites. awesome sweetie.

I have read this three times now,
Each time I think I have found a different message.
Your best line by far 'Consciousness faltering in a worthy collapse'

your funniest

'An upside-down dog'

there is some fantastic imagery going on here. This is one of them rare poems that has me stumped.
Very clever use of words. Very descriptive.
great write,

This is so full of messages.... I love the flow... Captivating!
Good piece:)

Your opening stanza gives such vivid images and I like how you have brought out the meaning or the ways to show "small favor" rather then spelling it all out for the reader...excellent writing!