Death

by Baby Rainbow   Aug 12, 2012


Red demonic eyes
peering through thin walls,
piercing my worried soul.
Draining my crimson blood
into it's hungry mouth,
eating me raw.

Saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    That's scary, the demons coming out of the wall and eating you. draining your blood and killing that way.

    Nice scene with a few words. well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great! The syndroms of death are plenty, but what we prepared and how we're prepared is little and not enough. Awesome write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Awesome write, I enjoyed reading
    very meaningful

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Hey :)
    First of, the title, I get goose bumps whenever I read the word "Death", and it turns on my curiosity.

    I LOVE the metaphors you used in this piece. Short but says a lot, awesome job, Baby Rainbow.