Comments : Love, the pure grace

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    The way I understood this piece is that once grace is lost then love too.

    I think this last line:

    "Once lost grace's lost too"

    I think it needs a comma after "Once lost, grace's lost too".

    Or re-arrange it in other way.. Once lost, grace is too..

    I'm not sure, I'm just a bit confuse on the wording on that last line.

    But true, once love is lost the grace is lost too.