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by L
The way I understood this piece is that once grace is lost then love too.I think this last line: "Once lost grace's lost too" I think it needs a comma after "Once lost, grace's lost too". Or re-arrange it in other way.. Once lost, grace is too.. I'm not sure, I'm just a bit confuse on the wording on that last line. But true, once love is lost the grace is lost too.
by Khalid M Darwish
Totally right Luce. I'll adjust it. Thank you.