Comments : Guidance of Hope

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Another powerful piece!
    'My heart latches onto you,
    a great weight becomes much lighter
    as I drift into your arms.'

    This is the most attracting part of stanza, so simple but powerful.
    Great job Saffie, Keep up

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    OMG, I love this piece:)
    All the poem is powerful, I love the way you write.
    Awesome job