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by Khalid M Darwish Aug 13, 2012 category : Love, romance / sensual love
We resemble the moon and sun Having lunar and solar eclipses, when despaired Together, where the water fall had us met, watching the bear hunting the salmons I fell asleep having you slept on my hand Submitting our souls to simulate the dreams As you were an endless-height tower, I had a dream Being the ocean crashing your foundations With each crash I had my promised kiss on licking your feet slowly eroding their smooth soft surface to the end You humbly decided to come down your knees Dissolving and melting your tallness and pride in my humility Our mixture resembled bears, embracing the smiling dolphins, and letting them go repeatedly, as a feather entering its inkwell In each jump, it pens a part of our everlasting dreams that our molten became 'both-in-one', waiting just for a wake up
by Chelsey
Khal, I thought this poem was just beautiful!! I think a couple lines need revising in the beginning, "met"..and "slept" sounded a bit off to me. However, the imagery was gorgeous...and the part about the feather entering the ink well. I thought that was brilliant. I loved it. Very sweet love piece from you my friend :)