Torched by your touch

by jodyann mcintosh   Aug 14, 2012


Torched and tormented by your touch
such an act made the sinner blushed.
Repulsion glued to my face,
as your demonic tongue swam in my ears.
A black hole soon developed within my soul
as I could not take the heat from the hell rooted inside my home.

You were hungry and you wanted to eat
I was available, I became your feast.

How with your lust and greed you polluted a temple so pure
your seed spilled on my grass, such disgrace. This temple has no cure
An assistant worker for the Shinigami
every night you'd killed a piece of me

A demon from the midst of hell
you'd come every night....
the whiskey danced upon your breath

Your fangs provoked my unripened body
my eyes pleaded ......
"won't you please stop dear daddy"

The joy returned to your possessed faced
while you'd plunged deeper into me
I'd prayed the night would fade away

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  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Let's get this over with.

    Critiques;
    First stanza; second line
    'blushed' should just be 'blush'

    Watch your punctuation throughout.
    Use 'I' instead of 'i'

    Now the content;
    I hope to GOD this isn't true!!
    This is just awful! I know it happens, but it's just so repulsive that I, and I suppose the rest of the world, tends to ignore, to push aside because we don't want to know the truth about such an occurrence.
    I can't offer anything but my condolences and a person to talk to if necessary, but this is truly horrible and I hope that if it is true, then it has at least stopped now. I hope you can possibly find closure from this horrible chapter of your life.

    Take care.

    • 12 years ago

      by jodyann mcintosh

      Ok thanks for comment i really appreciate it, ohh and the "blushed" i thought it was the right word seeing that i was speaking in the past. I will improve on my next poem. Again I thank you

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