You

by jodyann mcintosh   Aug 14, 2012


You!
who once proclaimed your love for me
do you still remember me?
does thoughts of me flood your mind
does the memories of my touch curse you with sleepless nights
did the love you once had vanished like yesterdays wind
you!
who once proclaimed your love for me
why have you forgotten me

you sleep as if my fluids have'nt stained your bed...
as if my scent is not locked away in every fiber of that floral sheet spread
have memories been erased of hours spend talking and listening to me sleep.
of us holding hands and leaving foot prints by the sea?
have the taste of my kiss already vanished from your lips
why haven't my love u miss?

im plagued with sadness by your sudden departure ,
but you are so euphoric as you quickly dwell into the arms of another
i felt safe locked in ur so called love
but did you really love me? i now ponder

I walked by the sea, to my sides were nothing but my shadow.I'm on my own
one set of foot prints, I cried,I hate being alone

i closed my eyes, as tears flood my face
'm trapped in the arms of sadness.
forced to deal with this heart broken mess

you!
who once declared your love for me
whu did you set me free?

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  • I love the context and the format - it's a powerful piece.

    But you need to proofread. There are punctuation and grammatical errors throughout the entire piece.

    ^^If you fix those errors up it will meet its full potential.

    • 12 years ago

      by jodyann mcintosh

      Thanks, i saw the errors when i copied and paste it from my facebook notes. Thanks for your honesty though, the others will be grammatically correct. Well i hope so :)