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  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    I love the context and the format - it's a powerful piece.

    But you need to proofread. There are punctuation and grammatical errors throughout the entire piece.

    ^^If you fix those errors up it will meet its full potential.

    • 12 years ago

      by jodyann mcintosh

      Thanks, i saw the errors when i copied and paste it from my facebook notes. Thanks for your honesty though, the others will be grammatically correct. Well i hope so :)