Where offense is found, Love is bound. What repels, is not meant to be.

Good work.... Its heart touching... I guess you are also a broken hearted

You have expressed your emotions well.

Favourite line;
'silly girl and her fairytale love...'

^^ We tend to dream about love based on fiction rather than reality, and it only disappoints us in the end.

Critiques;
In the last stanza; second line
'turn' should be 'turned'

I think that the capitalisation of the poem makes it a little disorienting to read. Capitalising words should offer them power or anger but by using it for the entire piece, it has diminished that power.

A really good write.