River called life
by Emerald Aug 14, 2012
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Its a river called life..many fishes many rocks along with the current of the fast city..time some times stands still. But only for a second..be prepared to be consumed by bigger fish..the rich people have it all..as night be comes over the water and it gets dark..every thing is still up and full of life..so why am I the one that's drowning |
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11 years ago
Wow, nice one you got here. I really like the lenght of your poem, your whole idea and all that. For me, short-ish poems are very interesting, keeps the reader asking for more. All in all, a very good one.
