Comments : Relentless

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Maryanne, wow....seriously, I read this three times before I could bring myself to comment. As much as this sounded like a vent, which Im sure it was, it was poetically worded and I Loved that! Vents turned into poems are my absolute favorite...

    Gosh, I wish I could erase the times my mom cried when I remained like I did nothing wrong..or pretended I didnt care. I hate those memories.

    This was totally amazing hun, I had to read it three times literally, because I loved it so much.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Really deep write the word choice was flawless and it flowed perfectly
    5/5 :)