Reflection..

by Rebecca Bentley   Aug 14, 2012


There's a girl in the mirror,
I don't know who she is.
Sometimes she looks familiar,
Other times I've never seen her face.
Her features are so vacant,
Her eyes are full of pain,
she always looks so lonely,
Like she's standing there in vain.

Today she started talking,
I took the time to stand and lend an ear,
She told me of her heartache,
And of all her fears.
She then went on to tell me,
Of the times she's been so hurt,
Of all the times she's needed help,
And lost her own self worth.

Her eyes, they never left mine,
Although it seemed she wasn't there.
My heart swelled with longing,
Her stories seemed unfair..

I told her she was beautiful,
That she was strong and smart.
And now she's faced her biggest fears,
Her life will truly start.

Then she started crying,
And As she said her name.
it became reality,
That her and I are the same.

All this time I thought I'd lost myself,
This reflection made me see.
Although hurting, I'm still beautiful,
That lonely girl in the mirror is me.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by jodyann mcintosh

    Very strong emotion, i felt this. I really did. great job

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wel done rebecca..i do agree wid wat mandy said...
    Life is al abt lovin ourslf..findin hidden potential..
    Things happen..and we lose fr a while..bt we shud nvr frgt who we r, frm whr we strt , and whr our shore is..
    Focus..

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Great rhyming and a great story, Rebecca!

    Be proud of who you are, girl..that is the only way to win in this harsh and lonely world..

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautifully written, strong emotion.

    I think it's important to love yourself and find strength from within, very insightful. 5/5

    mandy :)