Whooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
Ok, let me catch my breath again...... What was that?!

This speaks volumes in the dictionaries of love, lust, and intimacy. You knew the right words to use in order to keep the reader wanting more, brilliant.

But let me tell you what my fav line was..
"and dream of your last name uniting with my first"
^^
this is SOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEET, I loved how you said it this way <3

Great piece hon :)
xxx

I've read this a few times now and it's just brilliant and beautiful. I'm always a sucker for love poems... I'm jealous of your writing skills, lol. Your word usage is amazing, really captures the attention of the reader.

Love it. :)

Amazing poem Chels :p

It's almost poetic porn, so full of lust and desire.
Yet there is some sensitive stuff in it:

Tonight, immoral sins will smirch these sheets,
and I will crave your unending love, and dream
of your last name uniting with my first.

That is my favorite part of the whole poem!

I loved the last stanza the most lol. It's a very nice ending. Well penned piece chels. 5/5

I'm blushing, my cheeks are in fire, what a poem.. Must say indeed it is good

Struck by this literacy!!! My heart's steady beat skipped and lept with each line!!! My blood felt hot as you discribed more and more! I love this poem! If I could, I would give you a thousand 5s!!!

Truely amazing work!