How true in life is this piece... often times within my own life- I have had imaginary, pretend loves... just getting lost in the beauty of it all... such a romantic piece you have penned here.. very nice!

The most interesting parrt about this piece is your closing part...to make you real! Such an irony; it is as if sometimes we believe the lies we make up...and sometimes again; we wish something enough that we believe it's there.

Loved the rhyme scheme: not forced at all. Poem flowed well, first part a little bit cheesy...not a veryyy creative idea but enjoyable and cute...

Then it got more and more intersting reaching your last parts which in ny opinion were your strongest.

Well done!lovely

Cheesy cuteness, I love it,
Plus the whole concept around it is just so true, that we believe what we want to believe, even if part of us doubts .

Very nice write here.
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