Awesome poem. Loved the last line, good choice of words. Keep writing 5/5

mandy

Powerful! I loved the last line too.

Interesting poem, but very good. I loved your description of things at the end. I stumbled a few times reading this, it was slightly difficult to figure out the pace at which to read it. Just me though. 5/5

Thanx guys! Will check out sum of ur poems tomoz :D night xxx