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by TSI25 Aug 16, 2012 category : Love, romance / lasting love
Well it comes again to the writing desk where my quills have all absconded to a land of ink where none can blink and lovers once had bonded A touch of waxy curtains bled from weakest, sleepless candle lights now sparking from a darkness granting lulled clandestine sights to those of us in night's embrace betwixt frozen stars and frosted grass where all eyes look to wander Seeking passion's brazen brass I write to you, beloved one My heart lodged in my throat Remember the fire as our souls leapt higher As now we stay afloat
by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA
This is such a beautiful, mesmerising piece. I love you choice of words and your rhyming technique was fantastic. The imagery of this piece was vivid and the emotion behind each line was well expressed. The opening stanza was my favourite, and really drew me in from the get-go. Well penned. 5/5