Wow i absolutely love this one. Great imagery and flow. I love the incorporation of the seven deadly sins. Genius! Another 5/5

Ah! The seven deadly sins. You have incorporated them well. At first read, I thought this poem belonged in the 'Dark Poems' section, but you are right, it belongs here.

While reading it I actually could picture myself in a Carnival of Horror where ghostly grinning faces leered at me from all sides and laughter was more like a cackle... and I mustn't forget that music - surely you know the kind?

Very well penned. 5/5

My goodness, I love the imagery here, it is stunning. The flow was so smooth, and the theme so capturing. I think this piece was magnificently well written and sculpted just as an elaborate work of true art. Though it was sad/dark/ unusalish I greatly enjoyed it.