Something is Wrong

by TSI25   Aug 16, 2012


Something is wrong at the hour of midnight.
Figures dancing, prancing 'round the clock.
Eyes not releasing,
Fingers never ceasing,
To claw at minds, and ears, and souls,
And hearts, but never sight.

Focusing, but never seeing,
Lying down, but never sleeping,
Pupils fixed on ticking clocks,
With shattered struts and deadly locks.
Oh yes...
Something is wrong at the hour of midnight

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    I can picture this poem in my head very good

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, I love this piece. The style is amazing. The voice is clear and very wonderfully draped throughout your piece. The descriptions are phenomenal and the theme of the piece is so clear. Excellent, wonderful, magnificent.

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Once again, your imagery is just flawless!

    All I can say is: Brilliant!

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XXthe mistakeXX

    Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    I love the fast pace of this and the fantastic images that you create. My only suggestion would be to ditch the very first line, i think an immediate echo doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem, you wont lose any quality for doing so. Just a suggestion, it is your poem. Thanks

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