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by Khalid M Darwish   Aug 16, 2012


All things not possessed,
regardless the magnitude,
cannot be offered

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great write, Khaild.

    I'm wondering about the title.. Perhaps, what doesn't grow cannot be reaped, like what is not 'possessed' cannot be 'offered'? This is making me think. Brilliant.

    Keep it up,

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Nice one, Khalid. Nothing but the truth!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Amazing write. Not mincing words but straight to the point.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You can't give what you have never received
    This is a true statement

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    The truth, plain and simple.

    You cannot offer what you don't have/own