What you need

by Krysten   Aug 16, 2012


Let me ease your worried mind sweetheart,
Kneel down at my feet and gaze up at me
with wonder and awe.

I see into your soul.
I know every dark twisted thought you've ever had
Pass through your silly little head.

Hush now darling, your secrets are safe with me.

I won't ever breathe a word of your painful humiliation, your cries of pain, your sorrow as you spun down
The spiral into your current state of demise.

I know just what you need my pet,
Just a little cut here,
Some blood flowing from there.
Your blue veins gleaming
Like beacons through your pale flesh.

You want this,
And I your ever loving Master
will give you just what you crave.

Close your big brown eyes
You silly little girl, and claim your prize

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was very good, very fitting for the category as it is very eerie and dark.

    There is a typo in the first line where it should read kneel.

    The idea of this was very creative and you done well with it, good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Janis

    Well I really love this emotional and real way you display your words, It`s like conversation between 2 of you, one who is sad, but still trying and other which is sick of it all and just wishes destruction. It`s well portrayed fight in your own mind. You metaphors are deep and beautiful, and the way you show it is just so well understandable.

    As Darren mentioned it should indeed be kneel in first line and passing in forth.

    Anyway good job, take care there and keep on writing ^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Awesome, Some real painful words,
    I see this as a girl fighting the urge to cut,
    the best line is;

    I won't ever breathe a word of your painful humiliation, your cries of pain, your sorrow as you spun down the spiral into your current state of demise.

    It is just so overpowering, real strength portrayed by 'the voice'

    great passion in this and real sadness and insight into the mind of a cutter.

    regards

    First line should be kneel, sorry : -(

    **you have my final vote of the week**

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    So let her claim her prize.

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