So let her claim her prize.

Awesome, Some real painful words,
I see this as a girl fighting the urge to cut,
the best line is;

I won't ever breathe a word of your painful humiliation, your cries of pain, your sorrow as you spun down the spiral into your current state of demise.

It is just so overpowering, real strength portrayed by 'the voice'

great passion in this and real sadness and insight into the mind of a cutter.

regards

First line should be kneel, sorry : -(

**you have my final vote of the week**

Well I really love this emotional and real way you display your words, It`s like conversation between 2 of you, one who is sad, but still trying and other which is sick of it all and just wishes destruction. It`s well portrayed fight in your own mind. You metaphors are deep and beautiful, and the way you show it is just so well understandable.

As Darren mentioned it should indeed be kneel in first line and passing in forth.

Anyway good job, take care there and keep on writing ^^

This was very good, very fitting for the category as it is very eerie and dark.

There is a typo in the first line where it should read kneel.

The idea of this was very creative and you done well with it, good work.