Bring you loved one

by Ole Carsten   Aug 16, 2012


Love is holding its hand under me
Shielding my true heart for me

I am longing to hand all to you
My love is telling me what to do

Strong passions is dancing in my mind
I have searched the world and know where to find

A shelter so perfect and everlasting
Once I feared every one of your temperaments blasting

Now I know it is emotions screaming for love
Blessings sent for me from the angel above

Angel spread your wide wings and lift me on my way
You know where I have been and forever stay

Soon your duties and deeds are done
Your time is over and you are back where you begun

My angel you are free to love again
You have carried me to my love without a stain

We invite you a last time
Come and hear the bells chime

Bring your loved one with you
That is what we will beg you to do

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  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Oh:) a wedding in this poem? a new twist

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is sad and written so elegantly.
    What a beautiful love poem.
    wow Ole
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    First I love the rhyming in this poem
    it gives a nice ring and goes well with the flow

    "Love is holding its hand under me
    Shielding my true heart for me"

    I like these 2 lines specially the part "true heart"
    made me feel like u had another heart maybe as a camouflage or a first defense line to keep your real heart running and love was your 2nd defense

    U had a few mistakes like in

    "Now I know it is emotions scream for love
    Blessings send for me from the angel above"

    scream-- screaming ( tho I am not sure if u mean to use scream as noun or verb)

    send--sent

    "Angel spread your wide wings and lifts me on my way
    You know where I have be and forever stay"

    lifts--lift

    be---been

    over all this is an interesting piece
    good read =)

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