by Tylor delcourt Aug 17, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I love how you put me last on your list, and treat me like everyone else. |
by X Harlea X
This is pretty good, only thing is where you said " over whelmed " it should be together as one to say " overwhelmed " but other than that this is a good poem, and the emotion you put into it is deep. Good job. ((4)) |
Thanks |