Time

by Thomas   Aug 17, 2012


Looks can be deceiving
Many of you will know this
I might seem like a nice guy
but you're so far from the truth

Cause deep inside I'm an animal
A relentless beast with an endless hunger
A hunger for murder and death
One that needs to be fed daily

My body is just the tool
that I use to commit
all this horrible acts
when I unleash the beast

So many already died
I lost count way back
There are just so many
I can't keep track

It started with one
and kept going from there
You can truly say:
I'm a mass murderer of time

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I thought that this piece was a bit scary at first, then once I got towards the end I realized that you were referring to killing time. Perhaps bored too much? So when I got to the end it gave me a sense of relief. I was not sure what expect from this piece when i staryed read and im so glad i did read it. Well done with the rhymes, And also the flow.

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    A piece full of fear that says 'always keep away'. I found it interesting. Some critiques:

    'all this horrible acts' I think 'this' should read 'these' if i'm not mistaken

    'mass murderer' do you mean 'mass' or 'massive'? Because it depends on what you meaned.
    I enjoyed the flow.

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