Comments : Spring brings, autumn harvests

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What the spring won't take
    the fall will
    great job

  • I love poems about nature!
    This piece in particular is remarkable because it shows the beauty of nature as well as the cruel side, but a fact of life.

    For new things to grow, the first must die and the seasons show this cycle perfectly.

    Your title;
    A typo on 'Automn' - should be 'Autumn'

    Also I think a comma should be between 'brings' and 'Autumn' as a brief pause is needed.

    Well done. 5/5