Comments : Forlorn

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So sorrowful! I like the third stanza the most. Keep penning.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very deep and powerful poem, I like what it portrayed, and if I have not misunderstood I think I picked up the bit about self harming in the last stanza and the scars. It shows how the deep depression has its toll on this person and how alone they truly feel.

    Very powerful write, and nicely layed out and titled. well done.