"A soul or two in my behest,
I try to conjure up the rest.
Marching, Leading, Charging, Seething,
A hoard of hiding nations grieving."

well im officially blown away with your opening stanza, the rhyme was flawless and your flow was spot on to the letter, the way you worded things from the very beginning screams read on, its very captivating.

"What I despise is lead away,
I'll never change from yesterday.
I stand my ground and gather the mass,
Children will learn my ways will last. "

I always told you how great of a poet you are my darling, and it looks like i was right so your gonna have to start believing me eventually lol, your poem is getting stronger and stronger with the more vivid picture it creates in the readers head.

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Men stand strong and follow me,
Then, in time, the others agree.
I will see that perdition is done,
Stories will be told of 'When Nazi's won'. "

I am officially flabbergasted, I dont think ive ever seen a stanza that said so much with just words, and as ive just said up top, this whole thing is flowing effortlessly, you have a natural gift baby.

"I perceive this as no perennial war,
But a chance to impose my ways on all.
Bewailment is a weakness now,
Either comply or be taken down."

one thing I do LOVE about your poetry babe, is your ability with words that a lot of people cant intergrate into poetry but you do it so easily and thats to be admired! what can i say, what an ending, one I didnt expect, love this poem, but dont get me wrong, I do love you a lot more tho lol

PS: Nominated

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I am not going to say that it wasnt a good poem but clearly people who read this can see your means of yourselfullness its impressive and daring to put out there.
please you need to write more because its amazing how you just wrote this and touched me REALLY.