Free Thinker

I should have wrote this...I meant to write it...have you been in my head at some point LMAO!!

I cascade
across tender roots,
like a gazelle
within a heated breeze-
slithering slowly,
midst a demons
hiss.

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demon's

Devilish
desires
are plucked
away from a scattered mind
that has seen destruction
far more than I wish
to admit-

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I see this stanza as you being misinterpretated throughout life....your devilish desires get you into trouble when you don't foresee it happening.

I go unnoticed,
it suits me to be incognito,
behind the scenes
of a train wreck,
for theses leaves
are my haven-

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I can related to this very well...

I'm a nonconformist,
life is beautiful within the darkness.

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and this...I totally get...I don't conform to rules very well either but...I've never thought about it as me being in the dark...I always though those that conform were the loosers haha!!!

Oh, this was really deep and interesting. I enjoyed this, my only correction is " for theses leaves " this line in the last stanza, should be these.

I admire your talent and how you create such power, it is awesome. xx

O M G this must be nominated, you have the abilty to master any type of poetry sooo easilyy. I LOVE how you wrote this poem, how it flowed, the images, and metaphors.
AWESOM JOB ANDREA:)

Marvellous piece that should be put in a frame and placed on the walls. I absolutely want to be like you one day. You're a separate dictionarry Andrea. Your mind does no longer need to be polished. You've the capability to pen a far most unique piece of feeling cocktail. I totally support you.