by Maple Tree
OH YES YES YES!! Now this poem sings strength and confidence... I adore the message and I adore you and your strength... you go girl!! |
by Naughtymouse
OMG!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!! |
by Xanthe
Lovely, Saffie. |
TKR proud <3 love it! |
by Wild flower
You drew a nice picture in my imagination in this poem:) |
by Chelsey
Omgoshhhh Saffie I loved this! Loved the title of course!! Throw in some commas after the long sentences :) Other than that, girl I loved the imager in this piece, I loved what you were trying to say, I love that I felt "free" with you when reading this :) |
I adore this write, how cute and sweet |
by Karla
I was a Kite Runner too and it is one of the best clubs here. Your poem does justice to it and at the same time it talks about freedom and the beauty of running a kite. When I was a little girl I loved flying kites.I looked up and that kite gave a sense of identity.I knew I would be free some day.Awesome piece.Great work! |