by Lyndy Aug 19, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Closing eyes, |
This was really well-crafted brevity. I loved your title and how you tied in that whole theme of it being nighttime, but how night still has its greetings....I believe night can be very haunting sometimes and there is that whole thought of being alone. But here, you don't make it seem like things are ending...or are bittersweet. The night seems pleasant, and restful. I love the feel of "drifting" and how you really brought about peace of mind here in such few words. Neat short write, I got a lot out of it. |
by Lyndy
Thanks you:)..I'm glad you liked it..I hope to do better someday.. |