Gods exits (Double haiku)

by Khalid M Darwish   Aug 19, 2012


What calamities,
with which one is tightened up!
Their exits are Gods

Shrank, once got rings tight
passed, while I was thinking them
never get released

* each stanza is 5/7/5

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is amazing! one of your best ones. Again the syllables are perfect, I too misread the word exits for exists lol. amazing how your mind just assumes on words sometimes. So I was confused until I noticed the word was exits and made perfect sense!

    Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I feel like the first haiku explains everything and also the title though I kept thinking that it said exist instead of exits.

    What calamities,
    with which one is tightened up!
    Their exits are Gods

    -- I agree, if we have faith things will work out for the better. And hence the end for calamities is having faith that things will work out.

    • 12 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      'Their exits are Gods' means that their exits belong to God or with God.