I love the last stanza Mohan, clever piece with real sadness. It flows nice and you set the mood very well with the first line.
There is a real fight with your emotions in this, trying to draw strength, battling both depression and fond memories.
good write

Agreed, the last stanza really hit me. 5/5.

You did a really good jon on this:)
Love it^_^

I really like the flow of the entire poem. It included repetition which is a great technique in emphasising to the reader what you feel is so important. I like how you distributed between negative and positive emotions in the same stanza it really sets the scene on how our mind thinks.
I really liked reading this poem! Keep up the good work!

5.5 from me