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Ole, This is soooooo cool! Loving the analogy of an hour glass and that you turned it into shape poetry. Seriously, I really enjoyed that!

I loved what you were trying to get across here, however I feel like you over used the word "love" I would have like to see that substituted with a couple other words maybe romance, bliss, etc.

I still thought this was a great piece simply for the meaning and the creativity :)

Ohhhhh!!

I love this piece, it is true so true.

I didn't have any problem with the repetition of love though, I think it was needed and hence it was place where it was needed.
Okay, I like the use of the letters of the alphabet and forming the hourglass. My thoughts are that love is like that. It Could start with amour, beloved, courtesy... Idk I mean the letters could be arrange to describe how love starts according to the letters of the alphabet and hence adding an alphabet poem to this piece. But that would be difficult to find the Z to describe how love starts.. Though.. Any who, I like the idea behind this piece and also the shape well done.

Edit: on third read, I see that love it is repeated like chelsey said.. But still I so like the Idea behind this poem.

Oh, the layout of this is so unique i love it, even without reading it it just stands right out and shouts " look at me" It kind of reminded me of an egg timer, and the sand ( your letters ) running through the middle.

My only suggestion would be to change the grammer in this line : Sentences is rebuild letter by letter - to - Sentences are rebuilt letter by letter

- this would be the correxct grammer and it does not mess up your lay out or flow :)

Brilliant job on this one!