Comments : Incondite

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    So everyone immediately thought that the boy was unrefined because he lost his parents and had no one else to take care of him but him. And since he was the youngest one, the other guys took advantage of him and he had to stay late and finished the work for them. Hence the officials immediately thought that the boy was the one who committed the robberies and didn't give him a chance to explain. Until later they found out that it wasn't him so they wanted to redeem themselve and supported the child. It's a sad story yet it sort of has a good ending. I mean the child received help and had a better job. But I find the part that he has to stay with the officer for all his life sad..

    Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was a creative idea and a good thing to write about for this challenge, you done a good job and the layout was good because you broke it up well. Nice work.