by Khalid M Darwish Aug 20, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Being incondite, |
I had to look up the word "incondite" lol, and I quite like that word. In the haikus of yours that I've read, you really have this way of finishing off the haikus so well with a captivating line. Good job! 5/5 |
by Sparkling snow flake
Great Job! |
by Baby Rainbow
Really good job here, syllable count was spot on and the poem was quite powerfully desribing your word. Well done friend |
I love your short and powerful pieces. |
by L
Incondite can also mean unmannered and unrefined. Someone crude and raw as well. Hence the use of unpolished. In this short piece you described what this word meant. Well done. |